Camille, this was a really cool picture. Next time you could draw it yourself on paper. :)
Camille i think your work is awesome describing your work and why you love it i think you could work on maybe describing why you love it maybe you love the Crunch of the crunchie.
Thank you Kayley for your feedback
wow Camille, that is amazing that must have taken a long time to do but maybe next time you could put some more detail on the sentences.
Good job Camille that is awesome. But next you could draw it yourself.
Camille, this was a really cool picture. Next time you could draw it yourself on paper. :)
ReplyDeleteCamille i think your work is awesome describing your work and why you love it i think you could work on maybe describing why you love it maybe you love the Crunch of the crunchie.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kayley for your feedback
Deletewow Camille, that is amazing that must have taken a long time to do but maybe next time you could put some more detail on the sentences.
ReplyDeleteGood job Camille that is awesome. But next you could draw it yourself.
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